I gripped
her hand tighter in mine as strobe lights flickered in the room.
“Ready?”
I asked the other girls as we stare towards our reflections- the pulsing lights
illuminating jerky movements. Murmurs of agreement rippled through the three of
them. And I took a deep breath.
“Bloody
Mary,” I said softly, and Natalie gripped my hand tighter.
“Bloody
Mary,” We chorused together, “Bloody Mary.”
As soon
as the words left our lips for the third time the bathroom door was yanked open
with a loud creak. A shriek left our lips as we stumbled away from the door,
and the lights flickered on.
“What
are you, twelve?” Chrissy asked incredulously. “Keep the lights on, I’m not
peeing in the dark.”
Chrissy
was hardly five feet tall, but she could scare a grown man with a single look.
She stomped off into one of the stalls, and I glanced at the other girls to see
their reactions. They began to relax as we all exchanged looks before laughter
bubbled its way out of my throat. I suppose laughter was contagious because the
next thing I knew, we were all laughing.
My eyes
strayed back to the mirror, and my breath caught in my throat. Standing beside
me was a girl with long dark hair, and pale blue eyes. Blood covered the front
of her dress, and seemed to come from the wound on her neck. Her head tilted
lightly to the side as though she couldn’t figure out why I was staring at her.
“Cupcake?”
A hand touched my shoulder, and my eyes shifted to the girl next to me.
“Are you
okay?” Cassie asked as her hand fell back to her side. I glanced back at the
mirror- did they really not see her?- but she was gone.
“You
look ready to pass out,” Allyson spoke up. I glanced at my own reflection and
noticed how horribly pale I had gotten.
“I’m
fine,” I mumbled as I tried to get over the sudden terror I felt. “I think my
sugar’s just crashing. I’m just going to grab something from concessions real
quick.” I don’t think I could have left the bathroom faster.
I wasn’t
prepared for school the next day. When I walked in the doors, everyone was uncharacteristically
somber. I had no clue what was going on until the announcements came on in
second block. After I heard the news that Allyson had killed herself in the
theatre last night I was numb. I couldn’t speak, I couldn’t focus on anything.
I found myself in the boy’s dressing room next to the stage right after school.
The performance that night had been rescheduled so we could have a memorial for
her, but I didn’t care. I sat on the couch in the dressing room and stared at
the spot of dried blood on the ground, and the place where the large vanity
mirror once sat. From what I could gather, Allyson shattered the mirror before
using one of the shards to slice open her throat. My eyes raked over the room
as I tried to fathom a reason as to why this happened. When I caught sight of a
piece of mirror that had somehow stayed in the frame, I knew. Because staring
at me from the reflection was the same girl I saw in the bathroom mirror
yesterday. A vicious smirk curled her lips before she disappeared.
The next
two days followed in the same manner, Natalie and Cassie were both found near
the theatre with shattered mirrors and slit throats. Cassie had been found in
the girls dressing room, where as Natalie was found in the bathroom adjacent to
the auditorium. I had been numb the past three days- what were you supposed to
do when an urban legend comes alive and kills your friends?
I was next, I knew I was.
But I didn’t think she’d find me. The school had been closed for a few days due
to the rash of suicides, and the police were actually looking into it to find a
reason behind them. I knew they wouldn’t find anything.
I was a
wreck. I hardly ate, hardly slept, hell I hardly got out of bed. My mom tried
to drag me out, but eventually gave up. She couldn’t do anything- no one could.
After everyone went to bed one night, I found myself wandering into the
kitchen. I knew it was stupid, but I just wanted sleep. I took a large dose of
Nyquil and prayed that it knocked me out. It worked.
I woke up to hear knocking on glass. At
first, I thought it was the window until I heard it come from the mirror again.
The mirror I had was leaning again the wall- it was a simple full length
mirror. Slowly I got up and walked over to it. I probably shouldn’t have
approached the mirror when I was half awake, but I did. Looking into the
mirror, I didn’t think anything was amiss. I shrugged off the foreboding
feeling I was getting- there was no one here, and I was probably just imagining
it. But when I turned around to go back to bed, she was there. The smirk was
still present on her face, and the blood that nearly covered her entirely
looked fresh.
I didn’t
know what would happen next. When she suddenly reached up and shoved me back
into the mirror, I began to understand. It was my turn. All of the other girls
were gone, and now it was time for me to go as well. The mirror shattered with
the force she had shoved me with, and my body broke the frame. I could faintly
hear my parents stirring over the sound of their fans, but I knew they would
arrive too late. It all happened so quickly- she grabbed a shard of glass, and
a sharp pain spread over my neck. I could still feel the warm blood escape me
and trail down my neck.
I could
hear my mother stumble into the room, and her sobbing as she caught sight of my
body. Of my dad screaming in agony and disbelief. I could hear my brother ask-
with sleep lacing his voice- what was wrong. I could see her- I could see Mary-
standing behind all of them with that damn smirk still present on her face. And
then, nothing.
I loved the humor aspect at the beginning! I've never liked Halloween too much so the fact that you made the beginning funny was great. After that, excellent job with the creepy aspect.
ReplyDeleteWell that was creepy....so ya. VERY GOOD! This was great! I thought the anticipation and the build up was wonderful. I was on the edge of my seat waiting for the mirror girl to come and get you! You did a good job of describing the mirror lady enough where I could picture her but there was still an air of mystery. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI often get that irrational creepy feeling that when I close my medicine cabinet above my bathroom sink there will be another face reflected behind me. You've taken that little fear and twisted it into a huge nightmare! You do a nice job of pacing the narration and I like the phrase "with sleep lacing his voice." Thanks for scaring us all! I'll be looking for Bloody Mary in every mirror I see now.
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